Finished my Kinetic Novel... Kind of.

[neozf]

http://editingarchive.com/view.php?ID=878
The original story is only about a page long, so don't expect too much.
Also, I know I suck at drawing, but at least it isn't too bad.

[Google]

[Insane2757]

You know Neo, you can upload this version into Archive Fiction directly?

[Sim9]

I downloaded it and give it a run. I actually did like the watercolored art style, except for the re-use of the same scenes over and over again. I also found a plethora of spelling errors that you should proofread over before release. The story sounded interesting, if a bit too abstract for my own tastes. Overall, nice work! :)

PS - I see the engine supports branching logic - how about some multiple paths in the next one? :)

[Walrii]

Pfft Sim, I really liked it. I didn't think it had too few pictures. It had a "just right" amount. They gave an idea but the text was more important.

And I only found 1 speeling error :P